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Looking for some feedback on my train

Is there anything that stands as needing altering in this front train I've designed? I have used the template for comic96 so it should be the correct size at least...of course I plan to design a middle and rear carriage as well, but before I get carried away, I'd like to know if there's any glaring mistakes I've made or there's anything to improve :)

It's based loosely off the London Midland train I often see sitting at my local stations (1), (2)

Re: Looking for some fedback on my train

Reply #1 –
Looks good so far :) But a few things to mention: You forgot to paint wheels and I can't tell you if the colour you used for the windows is right, but it looks quite good. I'm not sure but the last image seems (too?) long.
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Reply #2 –
Yes, I thought it looked a bit long too, I might chop it down to size a bit...and add some wheels, ha ha

Here we go, an updated design;

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Reply #3 –
Seems better this way *thumbs up*
world is like a parachute: it works better when it's open
whenever you feel lost and alone, always remember your calculator is something you can count on
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Reply #4 –
Here's the mid coach design:

Also, a question: On both my designs have I got the second image wrong?
Should it be what the coach looks like facing away from the viewer?

Re: Looking for some feedback on my train

Reply #6 –
One last post before bed. I've corrected the perspective of both carriages in these versions.

I'm currently experimenting with different greens to help it stand out a bit more.

Will work on a rear carriage tomorrow (shouldn't take too long, just reverse the front carriage :P).

Thanks for the comments, keep them coming :)

Re: Looking for some feedback on my train

Reply #8 –
@sojo Go ahead, I'd be honoured :)